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		<title>Writing/producing for the web: BASIC principles of online journalism (Online journalism lesson #3)</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Feb 2009 10:40:37 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Paul Bradshaw</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here&#8217;s the 3rd in my series of classes in online journalism. Having already set up an RSS readers and Delicious account, a Twitter account and a blog, this week they start the news website, and learn about writing and producing for the web: Writing/production for the web &#8211; BASIC principles View more presentations from Paul Bradshaw. (tags: conversation bcu)]]></description>
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<p>Here&#8217;s the 3rd in my <a href="http://onlinejournalismblog.com/tag/classes/">series of classes in online journalism</a>. Having already set up an RSS readers and Delicious account, a Twitter account and a blog, this week they start the news website, and learn about writing and producing for the web:</p>
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		<title>Blogging journalists pt 4: Blogs and news production: &#8220;I think in hyperlinks, even when working in print&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Oct 2008 08:18:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Paul Bradshaw</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The 4th part of the results of my survey of blogging journalists looks at how blogs have affected how news production is affected by blogging. The area where respondents most often identified a change in news production was in the rise of a looser, more personal, and less formal writing style, echoing the findings of Wall (2005). Respondents talked of<br /><span class="read_more"><a href="http://onlinejournalismblog.com/2008/10/17/blogging-journalists-pt-4-blogs-and-news-production-i-think-in-hyperlinks-even-when-working-in-print/">Read more...</a></span>]]></description>
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<p><em>The 4th part of </em><a href="http://onlinejournalismblog.com/tag/blogging-journalists/"><em>the results of my survey of blogging journalists</em></a><em> looks at how blogs have affected how news production is affected by blogging.</em></p>
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<p>The area where respondents most often identified a change in news production was in the rise of a looser, more personal, and less formal writing style, echoing the findings of Wall (<a href="http://jou.sagepub.com/cgi/content/abstract/6/2/153" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/jou.sagepub.com/cgi/content/abstract/6/2/153?referer=');">2005</a>). Respondents talked of finding their &#8220;voice&#8221;, being more informal and &#8220;creative&#8221;. For some this fed back into the mainstream news vehicles, particularly for broadcast journalists whose work previously involved less writing.<span id="more-1623"></span></p>
<p>Some identified a move away from print- or broadcast-driven production processes, with some stories, for example, &#8220;written after the visual &#8230; rather than finding an image to support the story&#8221; (Respondent 26, Australia, newspapers), or vice versa.</p>
<p>The immediacy of the web was clearly a factor, with respondents noting that they worked more quickly, breaking stories on their blogs before following up both online and in print or broadcast. Related to this was a movement towards the iterative journalism that many theorists (<a href="http://astore.amazon.co.uk/onlijourblog-21/detail/1405179236" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/astore.amazon.co.uk/onlijourblog-21/detail/1405179236?referer=');">Beckett, 2008</a>; <a href="http://astore.amazon.co.uk/onlijourblog-21/detail/0820474320" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/astore.amazon.co.uk/onlijourblog-21/detail/0820474320?referer=');">Bruns, 2005</a>; <a href="http://astore.amazon.co.uk/onlijourblog-21/detail/0596102275" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/astore.amazon.co.uk/onlijourblog-21/detail/0596102275?referer=');">Gillmor, 2004</a>; <a href="http://nms.sagepub.com/cgi/content/short/6/4/443" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/nms.sagepub.com/cgi/content/short/6/4/443?referer=');">Matheson, 2004</a>) have identified in online journalism.</p>
<p>Brevity was also frequently mentioned, with journalists reporting writing shorter, more tightly edited pieces not just for blogs but also for print and broadcast.</p>
<p>Conversely, the web provided a space and technology for expanding in ways that print and broadcast did not allow.</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;Stories that otherwise would have been footnotes in print can be explored more fully on the blog,&#8221; noted one (Respondent 33, US, newspapers).</p></blockquote>
<p>Perhaps the most significant change was in the way that blogs provided a platform for stories or detail that would otherwise not make the print or broadcast version at all. Respondents talked of augmenting coverage that &#8220;would otherwise fall in the cracks&#8221;, of pieces that were interesting, but wouldn&#8217;t merit space in the paper, or that use elements that &#8220;don&#8217;t necessarily fit into the rigid lengths of radio pieces.&#8221;</p>
<p>It also meant journalists could link elsewhere when time or space constraints meant they were unable to report in full &#8211; to some extent fulfilling Jeff Jarvis&#8217;s rule (<a href="http://www.buzzmachine.com/2007/02/22/new-rule-cover-what-you-do-best-link-to-the-rest/" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/www.buzzmachine.com/2007/02/22/new-rule-cover-what-you-do-best-link-to-the-rest/?referer=');">2007</a>) of &#8220;Cover what you do best and link to the rest&#8221;</p>
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<p><a href="http://onlinejournalismblog.com/2008/10/20/blogging-journalists-pt-5-post-publication-%e2%80%9cyou%e2%80%99ve-got-to-be-ready-for-that-conversation%e2%80%9d/"><em>Read Part 5: Blogging and post-publication here.</em></a></p>
<p><em><strong>Has blogging affected your news production processes? Let me know in the comments.</strong></em></p>
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		<title>BASIC principles of online journalism: B is for Brevity</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Feb 2008 09:17:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Paul Bradshaw</dc:creator>
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<p><em>In the first part of <a href="http://wordpress.com/tag/basic-principles/" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/wordpress.com/tag/basic-principles/?referer=');">a five-part series</a>, I explore how and why a talent for brevity is one of the basic skills an online journalist needs &#8211; whether writing an article or employing multimedia. This will form part of a forthcoming book on online journalism &#8211; comments very much invited.</em></p>
<p>It shouldn’t have to be said that the web is different, but I’ll say it anyway: the web is different. It is not print, it is not television, it is not radio.</p>
<p>So why write content for the web in the same way that you might write for a newspaper or a news broadcast?</p>
<p>Organisations used to do this, and some still do. It was called ‘shovelware’, a process by which content created for another medium (generally print) was ‘shovelled’ onto the web with nary a care for whether that was appropriate or not.</p>
<p>It was not.</p>
<p>People read websites very differently to how they read newspapers, watch television or listen to radio. For a start, <a href="http://www.useit.com/alertbox/9602.html" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/www.useit.com/alertbox/9602.html?referer=');">they read 25% slower than they do with print </a>– this is because computer screens have a much lower resolution than print: 72 dots in every square inch compared to around 150-300 in newspapers and magazines (this may change, but usage patterns are likely to stay the same for some time yet).</p>
<p>As a result, you need to communicate your story in less time than you would in print. You need to develop <strong>brevity</strong>.<span id="more-880"></span></p>
<h2>Forms of brevity</h2>
<p>Brevity comes on a number of different levels. At the most obvious level, <strong>shorter articles</strong> tend to work better online because most people struggle to read long documents on screen, or find scrolling too much hassle if they&#8217;re looking for something specific or succinct.</p>
<p>This doesn&#8217;t mean you should write a 500-word snippet rather than the grand 3,000 word opus you were planning &#8211; but it does mean you should consider splitting that opus into smaller chunks (<a href="http://www.dartmouth.edu/~webteach/articles/text.html" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/www.dartmouth.edu/_webteach/articles/text.html?referer=');">chunking</a>): six 500 word sections, for example, each with a particular focus. You can always provide a link to a printable version of all the parts together.</p>
<p>That said, don&#8217;t split arbitrarily, or for the sake of it: every webpage is a potential entry point, and users need to be able to instantly orientate themselves.</p>
<p>More important than the length of the article overall, within the article itself, <strong>paragraphs should be succinct</strong>. Stick to one concept per paragraph. Once you&#8217;ve made your point, move on to the next par.</p>
<p>This may seem simplistic writing at first, but you soon become used to it. It&#8217;s how BBC reports are written online &#8211; <a href="http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/asia-pacific/7242016.stm" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/asia-pacific/7242016.stm?referer=');">see how effective it is</a>.</p>
<h2>Brevity in video and audio</h2>
<p>Brevity is equally important when producing multimedia material. For the medium that brought us YouTube, anything over three minutes is too long.</p>
<p>One simple technical reason is bandwidth &#8211; even now that the majority of users are on broadband, a significant proportion remain on dial-up, including overseas users.</p>
<p>Even those on broadband will not want to wait for video or audio to download, or their connection to slow down while they do.</p>
<p>Once again, this does not necessarily mean editing your whole story down to three minutes; it means a chunking approach to multimedia: breaking it down into its constituent parts. <a href="http://www.andydickinson.net/2007/03/12/moving-from-tv-to-online/" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/www.andydickinson.net/2007/03/12/moving-from-tv-to-online/?referer=');"></a></p>
<p><a href="http://www.andydickinson.net/2007/03/12/moving-from-tv-to-online/" onclick="urchinTracker('/outgoing/www.andydickinson.net/2007/03/12/moving-from-tv-to-online/?referer=');">As Andy Dickinson explains it</a>, this is a non-linear approach. Because unlike with TV or radio your user can enter the story at any point they choose: this might be the interview with the witness &#8211; or it might be, more specifically, the chunk where they describe what they saw. It might be raw footage of the aftermath. It might be the contextual information.</p>
<p>In short, you are released from the pressure of condensing everything to a three minute package (although you can do that as well), and instead provide readers with a range of paths to pursue.</p>
<p>Brevity works particularly well online because it allows for more effective distribution: others can link to the specific element they are commenting on, or even embed it on their site.</p>
<p>What&#8217;s more, it provides the raw material for further journalism: a user might decide to re-edit the material to provide a different narrative; or mash it up with maps or databases; or they might incorporate it into further investigation into a particular issue &#8211; all of which further distributes your good name, and provides further material for you to build on.</p>
<p><em><strong><a href="http://onlinejournalismblog.com/2008/02/20/basic-principles-of-online-journalism-a-is-for-adaptability/">Part two: A is for Adaptability, can be found here</a>.</strong></em></p>
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